那位高手能帮忙翻译成英语，谢谢 作者: silencez 时间: 2008-7-17 09:00
I am an aspiring man with strong enterprise, responsibility, excellent academic record, and team spirit. I always stay in concord for others. As a committee member of the student union, I was active to organization and take part in various kinds of activities such as evening party, English salon and so on and got the assent and concert of teachers and classmates, ground basis of enter the society.
I wish to improve my ability of living in and service the society, be an useful person to the society through practice.
这么翻译可以么 作者: 果澄 时间: 2008-7-17 09:56
“and so on and got the assent and concert of teachers and classmates”
你用了太多and
英文版的求职简历网上有很多，你可以借鉴下。但是建议你还是自己亲手准备一篇短小精悍的英文自我介绍，不用太难，一定要流畅自然地可以背出来。好好加油吧。作者: 果澄 时间: 2008-7-17 10:03
本科在读你可以这样表述
Now, I am a undergraduate student in XXX university.作者: jenny 时间: 2008-7-17 11:09
引用第3楼果澄于2008-07-17 10:03发表的:
本科在读你可以这样表述
Now, I am a undergraduate student in XXX university.
